This was cute, but the narrator's voice is so childish that it's hardly believable. I kind of wanted to choke Eliza sometimes, but then I also kind of wanted to choke everyone else in the story, too. It was kind of neat to see her complete the tasks from Tyler since they were things she never wanted to do or didn't have the guts to try. It's a good lesson to learn, even if the way it happens is pretty bogus. Decent story.